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Engelsk B, oversættelse

16. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)
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’A Christmas Carol’ (1843) er en novelle skrevet af Charles Dickens. Hovedpersonen er Ebenezer Scrooge, som lever et isoleret liv i selskab med sine elskede penge. Marley, hans kompagnon, er død for syv år siden – og med ham Scrooges eneste forbindelse til omverdenen, som han nu kun bevæger sig i, når han skal til og fra arbejde.

Vi møder hr. Scrooge og hans ansatte og kunder den 24. december, dagen før Juledag. Nu hvor julen står for døren, med sine krav om godgørenhed og gavmildhed, bliver Scrooge desto mere fornæret og ufølsom. Mens Londons fattige sulter lige uden for hans vinduer, afviser han alle der beder om hjælp. Og det til trods for kontorassistent Crachits utrættelige forsøg på at appellere til manden bag facaden.

Det bliver Jules Ånder, der omsider trænger igennem til mennesket Scrooge. Og det er først, da han står med ryggen mod muren, at det går op for ham, at han må ændre sig radikalt, hvis ikke han skal forlade verden som en forhadt og forbitret sjæl.

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Oversat tekst:

’A Christmas Carol’ is a short story written by Charles Dickens. The main character are Ebenezer Scrooge, who lives an isolated living in company with his beloved money. Marley, his companion, died seven years ago – and with him Scrooges only connection to the surrounding world, which he now only moves in, when he has to go on and off work.

We meet mr. Scrooge and his employees and customers the 24th December, the day before Christmas. Now where Christmas is just outside the door, with its demands of charity and generousity, des more Scrooge becomes stingy and insensitive. While London’s poor people is starving just outside his windows, he rejects everyone who asks for help . And this in spite of the office assistant untiring effort to appeal to the man behind the mask.

It be comes the Spirits of Christmas, who finally reaches into the human Scrooge. And it’s not until, when he stands with the back towards the wall, that he realizes, that he has to change radically, if he doesn’t want to leave the world as a hated and bitter soul.
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På forhånd mange tak!

Svar #1
16. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)

Er der ikke en der gider at være rar at kigge den igennem.

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Svar #2
16. januar 2006 af MaChris (Slettet)

Oprindelig tekst:

’A Christmas Carol’ (1843) er en novelle skrevet af Charles Dickens. Hovedpersonen er Ebenezer Scrooge, som lever et isoleret liv i selskab med sine elskede penge. Marley, hans kompagnon, er død for syv år siden – og med ham Scrooges eneste forbindelse til omverdenen, som han nu kun bevæger sig i, når han skal til og fra arbejde.

Vi møder hr. Scrooge og hans ansatte og kunder den 24. december, dagen før Juledag. Nu hvor julen står for døren, med sine krav om godgørenhed og gavmildhed, bliver Scrooge desto mere fornæret og ufølsom. Mens Londons fattige sulter lige uden for hans vinduer, afviser han alle der beder om hjælp. Og det til trods for kontorassistent Crachits utrættelige forsøg på at appellere til manden bag facaden.

Det bliver Jules Ånder, der omsider trænger igennem til mennesket Scrooge. Og det er først, da han står med ryggen mod muren, at det går op for ham, at han må ændre sig radikalt, hvis ikke han skal forlade verden som en forhadt og forbitret sjæl.

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Oversat tekst:

’A Christmas Carol’ is a short story written by Charles Dickens. The main character (is) Ebenezer Scrooge, who lives an isolated (life) in company with his beloved money. Marley, his companion, died seven years ago – and with him Scrooges only connection to the surrounding world, which he now only moves in, when he has to go (to and from work.)

We meet mr. Scrooge, his employees and customers (on) the 24th December, the day before Christmas (day. Now (that) Christmas is just outside the door, with its demands of charity and generousity, (the) more Scrooge becomes stingy and insensitive. While London’s poor people is starving just outside his windows, he rejects everyone who asks for help. And this (is) in spite of the office assistant's untiring effort to appeal to the man behind the mask.

It becomes the Spirits of Christmas, who finally reaches into the human Scrooge. And it’s not until he stands with (his) back (against) the wall, that he realizes, that he has to change radically, if he doesn’t want to leave the world as a hated and bitter soul.

Har kun lige gennemgået den hurtigt og rettet de ting jeg kunne se (det i parantes)

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Svar #3
16. januar 2006 af Decemberbarn (Slettet)

Scrooges only connection to the surrounding world, which he now only moves in, when going to and from work.

Skal man ikke have en -ing form?
Jeg synes det lyder bedre.

while London’s poor people ARE starving


Og jeg tænkte lidt på, at jeg tror du har for mange kommaer, som man f.eks ikke skal bruge ved NØDVENDIGE bisætninger.

Håber det var lidt hjælp ;)

-Decemberbarnet



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Svar #4
16. januar 2006 af AC_CA (Slettet)

* (had) died seven years ago
* the 24th (of) December
* poor people (are) starving

Svar #5
16. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)

Mange tusind tak alle tre, det hjalp meget! Mon der er flere der gad at kigge om der måske fandtes flere fejl? Det ville ellers være super! :D

Svar #6
16. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)

*update* :)

Svar #7
16. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)

*update* :)

Svar #8
16. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)

Please help. ;'-(

Svar #9
17. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)

Hjælp, please. :'(

Svar #10
17. januar 2006 af Arial (Slettet)

*update*

Fingersen! :D

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Svar #11
18. januar 2006 af Fingersen (Slettet)

Rettet videre på #2s version:

’A Christmas Carol’ is a short story written by Charles Dickens.

The main character is Ebenezer Scrooge, who lives an isolated life in company with his beloved money.

Marley, his companion, died seven years ago – and with him Scrooge(')s only connection to the /surrounding/(outside) world, which he now only (visits)/moves in,/ when /he has to/ go(ing) to and from work.

We meet /m/(M)r/./ Scrooge, his employees and customers on the 24th December, the day before Christmas /d/(D)ay.

Gider ikke mere i dag
/.../ = slettes
(...) = indsættes

MVH
Fingersen

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Svar #12
18. januar 2006 af Drogster (Slettet)

’A Christmas Carol’ is a short story written by Charles Dickens. The main character is Ebenezer Scrooge, who lives an isolated life in company with his beloved money. Marley, his companion, died seven years ago – and with him Scrooges only connection to the surrounding world, which he now only moves in, when he has to go (to and from work.)

We meet mr. Scrooge, his employees and customers on the 24th of December, the day before Christmas day. Now that Christmas stands before the door, with its demands of charity and generousity, des (evt. the) more Scrooge becomes stingy and insensitive. While London’s poor people are starving just outside his windows, he rejects everyone who begs for help. And this is in spite of the office assistant Crachits, tireles effort to appeal to the man behind the mask.

It becomes the Spirits of Christmas, who finally reaches into the human Scrooge. And it’s not until he stands with his back against the wall, that he realizes, that he has to change radically, if he doesn’t want to leave the world as a hated and bitter soul.

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Svar #13
18. januar 2006 af Drogster (Slettet)

"Marley, his companion, has died seven years ago – and with him Scrooges only connection to the surrounding world, which he now only moves in, when he has to go to and from work.

We meet Mr.Scrooge.

Chrachits', tireless effort to appeal to the man behind the facade (mask).

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